想要取得雅思寫作高分,有些錯誤千萬要避免,尤其是不能“zuo”。下面隨小編來一起了解一下吧,考生在備考中如果有類似問題的話要及時解決才會不斷改進。
1、“作”法之一:模板或模板句使用太過生硬或空洞,與自己的水平嚴重不符或與作文主題關(guān)系不大或匹配關(guān)系突兀;
Eg:
With the development of the society, the issue of environmental pollution has sparked off great controversy.
With the development of the society, more and more people choose to travel to other countries other than their own.
With the development of the society, there is a growing need of transportation.
Nowadays, I think that going to other places to travel have found their popularity and acceptance among citizens.
使用模板之前,一定要清楚這句模板句的功能是什么,是否與自己正要下筆的句子功能意圖一致——清晰思考,清醒下筆!
2、“作”法之二:大量堆砌僅有的、自認為可以“裝門面”的所謂大詞,而不管這個詞是不是合適在小語境和大語境里使用——這是典型的鴕鳥政策;
Eg:
取其精華,去其糟粕 assimilate the essence and reject dross
去偽存真 eliminate the false and retain the true
銅臭味 a stink of money
用詞,恰當為王。你看到的大詞,可能是別人使用得非常得體的大詞,題目不一樣、水平不一樣、寫作手法和文風不一樣,就一定不能盲目效仿,研究透了借用是可以的;另外,一個詞的詞義,最好要經(jīng)過原版文章、例句或英英字典的深度檢驗才能掌握好。
3、“作”法之三:平時素材積累不足或?qū)λ夭牡乃伎疾粔?,導致臨場發(fā)揮寫出的論據(jù)大而空,“放之四海而皆準”,打動不了考官;
Eg:
This detrimental phenomenon will impair the society and the people.
This would do harm to the world.
People’s happiness would be ruined.
素材需要不斷細致化,泛泛而談不但影響論證效果,還不利于多方面展示大家詞匯能力與造句能力,造成“懷才不遇”。需要指出的是,素材并非全部是背好了上去直接去用,而是根據(jù)實際情況,一些直接用,另外一些是根據(jù)生活與工作經(jīng)驗直接組織語言寫出來的,誰都可以辦得到,只要大家認可“細節(jié)”的價值。
4、“作”法之四:大量使用某一類自認為比較牛的句型或結(jié)構(gòu),但不是用錯就是單調(diào),不是單調(diào)就是句不達意或有冗余(沉迷于表現(xiàn)某一方面的實力而忽略了其它方面的正確表現(xiàn));
Eg:
Being a good product, we can use it for as long as we live.
There is no doubt that people will obey the rules, which are strict rules.
Some people, that are pretty rich, may choose to think differently when it comes to the issue of fast food.
句型是由表達效率和得體性與正確性來決定的,千萬不要沉迷于句型而不能顧及論證,導致顧此失彼,考完后感覺良好,成績出來不盡如人意。
5、“作”法之五:句間邏輯不緊湊,可能表現(xiàn)在連貫角度,也可能表現(xiàn)在銜接角度,重度或輕度意識流,考官讀到斷片兒。
Eg:
Some of these problems do exist, but there are other problems that I would discuss in the future. For example, one of these problems for us is to strictly control the intake of fat and sugar.
連貫和銜接是雅思作文的最重要的評分標準,因此必須重視。通順,是首要的,但有時候,因為銜接手段使用不當,或在連貫層面沒有考慮到文本邏輯和語言邏輯,就會導致“指代不明”等問題的出現(xiàn),考官讀著讀著就到溝里了。