用一些邏輯比如追根溯源,對(duì)比,細(xì)節(jié)特征,敘事性開頭,以此來(lái)秀出自己的想法,然后再引出觀點(diǎn),給出自我認(rèn)知。
追根溯源
就是分析一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)出現(xiàn)的原因,很多寫作話題都是社會(huì)現(xiàn)象,必然有它的一個(gè)背景性的原因在里面,就可以加以分析。
舉個(gè)例子,
題目:Foreigntourists should be charged more than local people when they visit cultural andhistorical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with thisopinion?
如何追根來(lái)引出話題呢?
示范:The continuing boom of the international tourism whichis to a large extent derived from the advancement of long-distance air travelhas made it more available for people to travel further, however the up surge ofthe tourists is blamed for damaging of the historical sites, thus many reach theconsensus that the foreign tourist should be charged more as one way toconstrain the deteriorating of historical attractions. for my part, however, itis too rash to make such a decision concerning the following.
是不是引出來(lái)了呢,同時(shí)也秀出了自己不是?
對(duì)比
分為時(shí)間性對(duì)比和地域性對(duì)比。
例,Gone are the days whenpeople travel on horseback for several to a tourist destination; we,contemporarily, can get to every corner within several hours by the highefficient flight, which give a great push to the boom of international tourismwhich is considered to contribute to the damage of the local historical sites.Therefore some advocate the high charge on the foreigners, which, from my part,is a rash decision. 時(shí)間性對(duì)比就出來(lái)了。
細(xì)節(jié)特征描述
這個(gè)比較難,但是比較能夠挑戰(zhàn)高分,還是這個(gè)題目,我們給出它的細(xì)節(jié)描述:
The wonder anddesire of the historical sites such as the great pyramids in Egypt, the warriorterra cotta in china and the garden in the heaven in Babylon attracts explorersall over the world to visit, which is blamed for the damage of the sites, thussome consider the higher charge on the foreigner so as to protect the touristdestinations. While for me, I consider it as a rash decision to make.
當(dāng)然還有就是敘事性開頭了,可以是新聞故事的描述,可以是某個(gè)現(xiàn)象的陳述,同一題目,再來(lái)看一例子,when you are wandering inthe street, particularly in the historical cities, you would be astonished to beencountered with so many foreigners surrounding you, which is thought to bebrought by the continuing international tourism. Whereas, this may to someextent lead to cultural invasion as well as architectural vandalism, leading tothe view of higher charge on the foreigners. While I think this is far frombeing a root conclusion.
看到這里,童鞋們可能覺得上面的幾個(gè)開頭似乎有點(diǎn)長(zhǎng)。但是好的句式不怕長(zhǎng),總比那些生硬套模板的要好很多吧!